Thursday, March 26, 2015

Marlborough Sounds Camp - Day 1

                                                                    Day 1
As we got to Marlborough Sounds my heart was beating so fast I had to run. I raced to my room and got into my togs and ran outside.

Tyler and Dylan jumped in the water and it took me a little bit long to get in. Then Tyler came back round and told me to swim so I jumped in and swam over to the wharf and started to do bombs. Dylan caught a little fish and threw it away and it belly flopped. Buenos!   

11 comments:

  1. That is a good story about swimming so I won't you to add a little bit more so I won't more better words and I like your writing about this story about swimming.

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  2. Hi my name is my Ethan
    I love your story about swimming and it sounds like it was fun with the best ideas
    And good words

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  3. Hi my name is my Ethan
    I love your story about swimming and it sounds like it was fun with the best ideas
    And good words

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  4. Hi my name is my Ethan
    I love your story about swimming and it sounds like it was fun with the best ideas
    And good words

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  5. Hi my name is my Ethan
    I love your story about swimming and it sounds like it was fun with the best ideas
    And good words

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  6. Sup Jackson
    My name is Huntah ;)
    Camp was sooo fun aye bro. My favourite part was the swimming aswell.
    Did you see the biggest eagle ray. Holy that was huge. ;)

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  7. Hi Jackson
    My name is Jackson i like your writing about your school camp that was properly the best camp ever. Next time you need little bit more about what you did.

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  8. sup Jackson
    my name is Dylan :) i like how you used lots of discripshon about what you did
    and my fish was int that small.:)

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